Monday, January 10, 2011

Camp Harmony

Question # 5
At the beginning of the camp, everyone seems excited. The univeristy students were singing. Sone's mom was being very possitive about the new place they re going to stay. At the end of the journey, everyone seems unhappy, depressed with their identity taken away. When people being named by number, bad foods and surounded by fences.
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4 comments:

  1. TienJanuary 10, 2011 at 5:34 AM

    OMG Selena, your post is amazing. The answer is perfect, I cannot tell you how much more should I expect to have more in your answer because it's none. Great job girl ^^

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  2. Thuy Duong FloraJanuary 11, 2011 at 4:49 AM

    yeah, if we understand this question in the way that you understand (mood of the people on the bus at the beginning of the trip to the end of the journey, when they live at the camp), then I agree. I like it when you interpret clearly the change of people's mood at the beginning and at the ending. To make your answer better, you can even use some quotes :)

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  3. Sarryna HoangJanuary 11, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    Your post is amazing :P
    Perfectttttttt :x

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  4. PatrickJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:35 AM

    I agree. Quotes would help, but you did a great job of directly answering the question and explaining your reasons.

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